In my To Kill a Mockingbird paragraph I realized that my quotes were not embedded very well. Another element of the 5 part paragraph was the commentary. I had the right amount of commentary but I did not elaborate and that caused my paragraph to be very short. One of the last things I realized needed work on was my concluding statement. My concluding statement needed to be stronger and wrap up the overall idea of my paragraph better.
In The Knife by Richard Seltzer I believe that I embedded my quotes better and that the overall project went smoother this time. I tried to elaborate more and I feel that this will add more depth and understanding to my paragraph. This time my concluding sentence wraps up the entire paper summing up the meaning of the paper.
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